reflection on paper

Writing this paper was a good experience for me. It made me open my eyes and to critically think about the ways the technology around me are affecting my life. It helped me focus on the significance experiences I have had with different forms of technologies and how those experiences affected my life as a whole. It was pretty tough writing this paper. Having one topic and going into so much detail and trying to remember all of the experiences with technology that I have had was hard.
I’m not sure if I did a good job with my introduction paragraph. My first intro paragraph was awful. Then I went back and revised it and tried to make it more catching and exciting. I tried to make it so the reader would want to keep on reading. I hope I was successful with that. Another part I struggled with was focusing. At first my paper did not have much focus. After revising it, I went back and pretty much started all over. The second time around I feel I did a much better job of focusing.
I hope to have gotten a good grade with this paper. I thought I did a good job going into detail with my experiences. I tried to go back and remember how I felt and to put it in my paper. I thought I did a good job reflecting on my experiences with technology and showing the significance it had with my life.